31 January 2009

Frost from Fog

ice-coated sage
gleams silver in
dawn’s early fog

Once again, we had a foggy night coat everything in ice. Now if only I could come up with the right words to describe the wisp of fog that hovered over us, wraithlike, as it crossed the interstate..


Irving said...

wraithlike is a good way to describe it :) And a very good haiku :)

Qalmlea said...

Thank you. And the only word I'm settled on for that is wraithlike... but that's not quite enough on its own. ^/^